Music Video Rough Cut

Music Video Rough Cut 

Above is my rough cut for my music video, I am pleased about the narrative of this video I feel that I have represented my idea well, however I feel I could touch more upon the editing by creating a stuttering effect which I initially intended, I also think I could overlay some filters, film burns, and light leaks to make the footages more vibrant and give the illusion of summer time. To improve this video I will need add more of my initial idea from my pitch, I will need to also make the video more ‘out-there’ which could be done by adding more overlays or adding more abstracted footages however I will need to make sure I refrain from editing too heavily especially in the beginning as it could disrupt the narrative and lessen the climax of the ending scene which could put people at unease which is not the intention of a chillwave music video. I do not intend to change any footage I have used as it seems to be working well and if I decide to integrate more footages it may look over the top and would also cause more difficulty to keep the footages in sync with the music.