My Music Video 2nd Rough Cut

The music video above is my 2^nd rough cut, there is not much more to improve upon however my teacher gave me the feedback to get the first few shots in sync with the music as well as changing some of the filters that do not work. She also noted that I could make the video a bit more abstract and psychedelic and also to remove some of the darker footages. I have also managed to get some feedback for this video on my YouTube comments (which you can check by clicking the title of the video). These feedback will help me answer evaluation question three.