Tuesday, 8 March 2016

Music Video Rough Cut

Music Video Rough Cut 


Above is my rough cut for my music video, I am pleased about the narrative of this video I feel that I have represented my idea well, however I feel I could touch more upon the editing by creating a stuttering effect which I initially intended, I also think I could overlay some filters, film burns, and light leaks to make the footages more vibrant and give the illusion of summer time. To improve this video I will need add more of my initial idea from my pitch, I will need to also make the video more ‘out-there’ which could be done by adding more overlays or adding more abstracted footages however I will need to make sure I refrain from editing too heavily especially in the beginning as it could disrupt the narrative and lessen the climax of the ending scene which could put people at unease which is not the intention of a chillwave music video. I do not intend to change any footage I have used as it seems to be working well and if I decide to integrate more footages it may look over the top and would also cause more difficulty to keep the footages in sync with the music.

Magazine Advert Rough Design

Magazine Advert Rough Design


Displayed above is my magazine advert which accompanies my digipak design. I am pleased with this draft in terms of the composition and style however there is much more I could do to improve this design.
My magazine advert was made using Adobe Photoshop and I composed myself siting on a rock and composed another imaged of the sky for the top of the artwork. There is still much more improvement to be made as the image of me is not positioned and edited correctly.
I have not stuck with the typical conventions of using the same image from the digipak front cover  as I wanted this magazine advert to be less direct and more ambiguous making the audience question what the imagery is about and to also make its own individual artwork. The negative aspects of this advert are that it lacks the watercolour style of the digipak design. As well as this the Typography does not seem to work as my original colour for the name ‘Shiloh’ was written in white in my digipak, therefore this will need to be changed. It would also be nice if I add more information i.e. the website of the record company and the artists, I should also include where it can be purchased.  Potentially this magazine advert could look better I included the same elements of design as used with my digipak. 

DigiPak Rough Design

DigiPak Rough Design

Displayed above is my rough draft for my digipak that will accompany my music video. I have decided to with a blue theme colour however I ambiguous about this decision as I feel that it don’t work with the chillwave genre, however I do like the style, as it is relevant and aesthetically appealing.

The artworks presented here were made from using Adobe Photoshop; overlaying watercolour paint onto the images mask layer created the watercolour effect, I also created a double exposure effect to combine images together.


To improve this product I was given the feedback to stick to three main colours either to use warm colours or cold colour in order to avoid it being over the top and confusing, there should also be a clear connotation to why I used the colours and style. I aim to market my artist in a creative, abstract, and a very ‘out-there’ way hence I have chosen to do this artwork. Unlike other genres chillwave artist doesn’t always present there imagery like most pop artist do, for example the image on the front cover is not centred and is less directed to the audience; throughout the digipak the front cover has the only imagery of the represented artist.  The typography would also be another I need to work on, as there is not a very clear link between the text and imagery in terms of the colours used.

Front Cover
The front cover is an image of me dominantly on the left side leaving space for the texts. The image has watercolour style relating the chill vibes of chillwave. The costume used is the same as the one used in the music video for the audience to recognise the artists.

Back Cover
The back cover is an image of my hand, which has relation to the music video. The back cover has an error, as the image was accidently desaturated and the token that was supposed to be held in the image was accidently removed. The image continues the watercolour theme.

Left Insert
The left insert is a bit more different I have used a splash effect and double exposed an image of me climbing up a rock. The image was also discoloured and then used a green blue gradient to re-colour the image.


Right Insert
The right insert presents my CD design behind a white background however I feel that the white background does not match visually with my style. The CD design presents me walking up a hill, which is combined and composed with another image of the sky. The images were then masked with splashes of colour.